Monday, May 19, 2008

NLT: Chapter One (Part 2)

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Chapter One

Don't Shoot!

(continuation)


‘Stand aside inspector. You don’t want the kid to die,’ roared Qureshi.

‘You bastard, you sick bastard, leave the kid,’ Ajay felt his anger pounding up.

‘Drop your gun, you B^#*ch*d,’ Sajan was trying to hold his gun in his sweaty hands.

‘No, you drop your guns. You can’t touch me now.’ Qureshi laughed maliciously, ‘Commissioner, order your men to drop their arms.’

‘My child…’ the girl’s mother was wailing, and Sajan was holding her back.

The commissioner ordered his men to back away, ‘Back away, drop your weapons.’ The constables put their arms down. Then he turned to Ajay. ‘Let him go Ajay. We can’t put the child’s life in danger.’

Ajay wasn’t listening. There were a hundred thoughts going on in his head. I can’t shoot him in the leg or torso, he’ll kill the kid. I have to shoot him in the head, turn him off like a switch. But the don was holding the child as a shield.

‘Give it up, Qureshi. Its over’ Sajan tried to negotiate.

‘No… you’re finished. Once I’m through with this, I’ll wipe off your entire family’ Qureshi laughed insanely.

Ajay’s mind was teeming with thoughts. Mass-murderer! The only thing that gave this man power – fear! The fear of losing one’s life. The fear of losing one’s family. The fear of losing everything one knew!

‘Don’t shoot, Ajay, let him go,’ the commissioner was trying to convince him.

But Ajay was lost. His mind was elsewhere. The testimonies of the victims. The old man who saw his entire kin shredded to bits. The mother who was forced to watch her daughter raped repeatedly. The father who showed the photographed of his four sons who were mutilated and murdered. The three-year old who was left at the mercy of Qureshi the pedophile…

‘No! you swine.. Qureshi, you son of a whore.. you’re dead meat.. you’ll not leave this place alive!’ Ajay’s anger was as though he was going to explode. Everyone was stunned.

Voices sounded so distant. The commissioner’s (‘Drop your gun Ajay, that’s an order’). Sajan’s (‘You can’t escape, Qureshi.’) Time slowed down.

Take the chance, Ajay. You’ve never missed. You’ll never miss. Voices within him spoke, Egg him, egg him so much that he’ll point his gun at you. Then you can nail him. Shoot him. Finish him. He’s too dangerous to be left alive.

‘You pimp.. you beast.. You’re a mother-_____’ Ajay spat out. He could see the don getting restless. That malicious grin had faded from his face.

Remember the testimonies, Ajay. You know about the cases that even the press did not carry. Remember six months of hard work. Remember the victims. Remember the old man. Remember the mother. Remember the father. Remember the three-year old…

‘Qureshi, you motherf___ing piece of shit, you pedophile. I even heard you f___ your own daughters..’ Ajay made his final move.

‘Aargh’ Qureshi pointed the gun at Ajay and pulled his trigger in a fit of rage. But he gave enough time for Ajay to pull his.

Bang! Bang! Two simultaneous shots!

The bullet hit Ajay in his arm. He felt it, but there’s was no pain.

Almost the same time, Qureshi and child fell back. Qureshi gave a loud cry which registered a hit.

Ajay knelt down, and pressed hard to stop his bleeding, still clutching his handgun. People began to crowd over the fallen don. Then he heard the commissioner, ‘He’s gone.’ He was pale as a ghost.

Ajay gave a sigh of relief. He didn’t miss. The Don is finished once and for all.

‘Call the ambulance,’ Sajan told a constable. That made Ajay look at him.

Something wasn’t right. Sajan was staring at the don. There was concern on his face. Something wasn’t right.

The girl’s mother was pleading to Sajan who was holding her back, ‘please let me go, I want to see my daughter.’ Sajan paused for a moment and let her go.

Suddenly Ajay felt his wound throbbing. He could smell his blood. There was pain. He clutched his wound even harder, letting go of the pistol. There was more pain.

A woman’s high-pitched wail pierced the air. Ajay raised his head. An unfamiliar fear rose in him. He saw Sajan walking towards him. ‘What’s wrong, Sajan?’ Ajay asked eagerly.

‘The paramedics are on their way. Stay calm,’ Sajan replied.

‘I’m okay,’ Ajay spoke through his teeth.

‘It’s not for you.’

‘What? Did.. did I.. miss?..’

‘You didn’t miss. Qureshi’s dead.’ Sajan knelt beside him, ‘the little girl..’

Ajay just stared in horror.

‘Your bullet passed through her body first.. There’s only a slim chance she may live..’

‘Slim chance?! What slim chance?’ the commissioner screamed at the top of his lungs, ‘You killed the kid, you psycho!! I told you not to shoot.’ He was quivering with rage at the death of the don.

Ajay felt darkness creeping into his eyes.

‘Enough sir, you’re not helping the situation,’ Sajan spoke to the commissioner. He made no attempt to disguise the anger in his voice.

‘Don’t give me that tone! Should I sing a lullaby to a child-killer?’

‘You’re upset that you can’t pay the electricity bill of your three crore house anymore..’

‘How dare you..’

‘Or maybe you’re scared that Qureshi’s brother will take you down ‘cause you assured him safety..’

Things were going very differently in Ajay’s mind. You killed a child, Ajay. You’re no different from them. You’ve become what you hated. You’re a child-killer!

Someone in the crowd shouted, ‘Murderer.’

Ajay fell forth and vomited. He passed out. The last thing he felt was the warmth of his colleague's arms trying to pull him up.



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Friday, May 16, 2008

NLT: Chapter One (Part 1)

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Chapter One

Don't Shoot!


‘It’s almost one o’ clock.’ Sajan was looking at his watch rather impatiently.

Ajay didn’t comment on it. He ran his eyes across every face that came out of the airport. He was searching for a face that he could hardly miss, yet it was possible that it would slip unnoticed like it had done before.

‘Qureshi could come any moment.’ Sajan was eyeing everyone like he was paranoid.

Most police officers would have winced at the mention of his name. But Sajan, a sub-inspector of the Mumbai police force, spat out that name with disgust and contempt. He was from Bihar and like all good Biharis hated politics, corruption, and crime. He worked hard to be in the force. He worked as if he had a personal vendetta against all criminals. He was ruthless to them.

Ajay too, was an honest officer in the otherwise bought Mumbai police. What other officers could achieve in years, he could do in months. But like Sajan he too had to fight against many odds: gangster threats, colleagues’ indifference, and superiors’ interference. Here, honest officers were a sort of endangered species.

Saab, chai?’ the vendor asked.

Ajay sipped his tea. He looked at men with turbans, beards, and glasses. In his mind’s eye he saw how they looked without those features. None resembled him. Ever since Ajay became an inspector, he was obsessed with one name: Iqbal Qureshi.

Iqbal Qureshi was an underworld kingpin. His crimes exceeded those of Ivan the terrible. The magician who could make entire families disappear. The police and the politicians eat out of his hands. Rivals in the business keep a low profile to keep their heads. Even the police commissioner used to attend his parties. So do other high officials and starlets.

Ever since Ajay first heard of his atrocities, he was working on collecting evidence on his crimes, interrogating witnesses and victims. In most cases, the FIR was written favorable to the don, proof that most police officers were on his payroll. Ajay carefully collected every piece of evidence to nail the don.

Two days ago, an informer who was afraid that he was going to end up dead soon, telephoned Ajay with a piece of information: Qureshi was coming home to Mumbai, after a pleasure trip to Thailand. Two days were enough for Ajay to make a special team of highly able officers. His plainclothes men were ready to take on Qureshi.

Two hours before the operation, the commissioner came to know of it. And that was all. Ajay and his men were posted in the parking lot. The commissioner with the constables holding .303 rifles were posted at the entrance. Ajay knew about the rifles, they were the kind used in the Second World War.

Ajay didn’t want to believe it, but he knew the commissioner was bent on saving Qureshi. The uniformed men were enough to put him on alert. Then Mr. Q would take care of himself. Or else the commissioner would even escort him to his car.

‘Sajan, move near the gate. Look for disguises, but probably he won’t try that. Be careful. His bodyguards are said to be lethal shooters. I’m moving to the entrance. Good Luck!’

‘No probs. I’ll make sure he won’t slip that way.’ Sajan walked towards the parking lot gate.

Ajay finished his tea and looked around for a garbage can.

‘Beep beep.’ His mobile rang. Could it be his lookouts inside the airport? Did they spot him?

Ajay took out his cell phone. Surprisingly there was no number on the screen. He thought of switching it off, but couldn’t take the chances. He pressed the answer button and held it to his ear.

‘Qureshi. Black business suit. Two goons with him. Possibly armed. At the entrance. Move, quick!’

Still keeping the phone to his ear, Ajay turned around. The informant should be close by yet able to observe the entrance. A few yards ahead, he saw two men. One of them had a cell phone to his ear. He had his back to Ajay. He could be tall enough to be a pathan. The other even taller wore round framed glasses and seemed to be staring at him. He had a cup of tea in his hand.

‘He’s leaving. Now!!’ The voice in the phone erupted.

Ajay wasn’t sure it was the same man. But the words sprung him into action. There was no time. Qureshi could be leaving. He tossed the plastic tumbler to the ground, and thrust his mobile to his pocket. He sprinted to the entrance.

Even at the distance, Ajay recognized the bald man in the black suit. The bastard made no effort to disguise himself. Too confident, he thought.

Ajay felt the excitement, the anger. The bleeding tales of the victims, their tearful eyes at the interviews, everything came to his mind. He pulled out his FN-35, an encounter specialist’s delight.

‘Freeze!! Police!!!’

The commissioner who stood so close to the don that he might have brushed shoulders with him, suddenly faked an element of surprise, ‘What?! Q..Q..Qureshi?’

Everything fell so silent that Ajay could hear nothing but his heart beating frantically against his ribs. Qureshi rather than felt cornered, might have felt insulted. The commissioner was terrified more than anyone else.

‘Surrender Qureshi, we have a warrant. There is no escape!’ Ajay’s voice was trembling, but it was furious.

Perhaps it would have led to a peaceful arrest if it weren’t for the thug in the dark green suit. The thug pulled out a gun fast. But not fast enough. He tried to pull out the safety hatch.

Bang! Ajay shot him in the chest.

The thug fell to the floor and spat blood. But he held on to the pistol, and tried to raise it.

Bang!!

He spat more blood and was no more a threat. The second shot came from Sajan. Ajay looked at him. Sajan’s expression was ruthless. In one hand he had a gun. In his sweaty other hand, his cell phone.

‘No escape Mr. Q. Surrender.’ He spoke calmly.

The commissioner woke up from his trance, ‘Huh.. Yes.. Mr. Q.. Qureshi.. pl.. please surrender..’ The policemen, like tin soldiers, raised their rifles.

The onlookers who were stunned until then slowly began to back away in panic. The other bodyguard raised his hands up in the air, kneeled down and saved his life. It was a clever move.

Qureshi’s wrath was immense. But he was quick and jumped over the railings into the crowd nearby.

‘Damn sonofabitch!’ Ajay followed suit. He couldn’t shoot. Not in a crowd. Innocent people could get hurt. Sajan hurled abuses at Qureshi and rushed into the crowd. He knew Qureshi couldn’t get far. But something spoiled their calculations.

Qureshi snatched a three year old girl from her mother. He held a gun to the child’s head. Qureshi had a hostage.


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Wednesday, May 14, 2008

NLT: Foreword

That's it guys, I have decided to write a novel. Ha, at least a part of it. This one has been in my mind for more than ten years. Actually the basic plot changed over time, and the title became no longer relevant. I haven't retitled it yet. So I'll keep it abbreviated to NLT.

The characters are amazing (I think so!) and I owe that to my brother (the dude's got a heap of talents) for creating the first draft in our minds. I used to hate James Bond movies. Come on, the portrayal of spies and gadgets is so unrealistic. Secret agents don't come in tuxedos and expensive cars. I suppose that made me write this. I have written three chapters so far, and believe me, its no easy job. So I'm going to post each chapter I have written, once I finish typing it.

Who knows? Maybe you guys will encourage me to write more (or burn my manuscript).

Adieos!

Dedicated to my bro,
Dr. Abhilash
(yep, he's a doctor now)


Thanks to my friends
Shabib and,
Sharmila
for their feedback.

Here are the links to the chapters:


I'll be posting the links, as soon as I finish it.

Thursday, May 08, 2008

Schizophrenia

I love graphic novels. Especially the Sin City ones. Actually it might be just those. Sex and violence in marvelous ink panels, more like a cross between a neo-noir movie and a book. Frank miller's language is simply awesome. Its just mindless violence plus good story-telling. I would say, guys at least watch the movie!

This is what I tried. It actually came out better than i expected. Its been made as three parts, to be inserted at different places in a bigger graphic novel (I have already thought of the plot of that one!). Page 1 is the first part. Pages 2 - 5 constitute the second. Pages 6 and 7 cover the last.















As with most of my themes, this too is dark and disturbing. Looking forward to your comments.